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In some countries, children start school at the age of seven, so they could have more time to build relationship with their parents. In other countries, some think that children start school as young as possible. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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How old children should start to go to school is the topic discussion in the general public. People pay more attention on the education of children, because children means the future of country.

Some people hold an idea that children should began to go to school at seven. Not only children should have some ability to go to school, but also they need spend some time with their parents to build relationship. Firstly, children do not have some ability which are very necessary for school when they are born, such as ability of understanding , self-control, especially some basic ability like going to bathroom by themselves. Those ability should be taught though period by their parents before they go to school. If they do not have those ability , they might meet some trouble at school like they do not know how to use bathroom just release themselves in the class, they cannot control themselves just speak at any time they want, they cannot understand what teacher talk about. Thus children need some time to learn those ability, and seven years is a prefect time. Secondly, parents are very important for children, because they are the first teacher in children whole life, while children keep at a distance from their parents when they start school, because they have more peer friends. They do not talk some little secret with their parents even though they do not like to talk with their parents any more. This is not good for the relationship between the parents and their children , thus we should leave some time for them and seven years are the perfect time.

Others argue that children should go to school as young as possible in  order to have positive situation in the future. With serious competition, age is a big opportunity for people, and young people have more opportunity than old people. If children start school as young as possible, they could graduate as young as possible, and they could have more chance. But children would not have any childhood, if they go to school earlier. Childhood is very important for children, because they can image everything and do everything they want without any rules. It is very good to cultivate the ability of creative for children, which are very important for studying and working in the future. Like my uncle who is very famous scientist had very free and long childhood until eight years old when he began to go to school. He imaged lots of wield things when he was child and made some of them to come true, such as a convenient toilet which you can bring it anywhere you want.

Personally, I think that seven years old is the prefect age to go to school. Children not only have a beautiful childhood which they need , but also spend these time with their parents to build relationship and learn some basic ability.

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